So I just made a video for this company. It's not a straight up commercial, they wanted something a little bit vague. Anyway, it seems like they are going to use it as I made it up on their page. But it's still a 1st version so I would like some input on what you think about it and what minor edits I can make to give it just slightly more of a commercial feel.
***I know the girl isn't super HOT. At least she has something...well...two big things going for her.
http://www.circuspop.com/adlandingpage.html
I have it posted on Youtube as well. Comments and Suggestion are highly appreciated!
Thanks!
