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Opinions on My Video Please!

Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:31 pm
by Pigskinfever
Hey Guys,

So I just made a video for this company. It's not a straight up commercial, they wanted something a little bit vague. Anyway, it seems like they are going to use it as I made it up on their page. But it's still a 1st version so I would like some input on what you think about it and what minor edits I can make to give it just slightly more of a commercial feel.

***I know the girl isn't super HOT. At least she has something...well...two big things going for her. :shock:

http://www.circuspop.com/adlandingpage.html

I have it posted on Youtube as well. Comments and Suggestion are highly appreciated!

Thanks!

Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:15 am
by VetSkinsFan
came up as a blank page, link the youtube maybe?